PITCH AND LOGLINE
SCRIPT
EXT. HIDEOUT - NIGHT
ROMAN
Seth, Dean, everything sorted?... gloves,phone,knife?
DEAN
We are going to be rich! you hear me RICH!
ROMAN
You know it brother, Seth you okay? you seem a bit anxious
SETH
hmm,huh? no,no just thinking about the money we are going to have.
ROMAN
Let’s go boys!
15 MINUTES LATER…
EXT. MUSEUM - NIGHT
ROMAN
Seth,you act as bait, whilst Dean sneaks round back, just remember there is expected lasers, placed in the order of 18cm,12cm,18cm, so on. i’ll watch lookout, if there is any unexpected figure, Breach! which basically means, RUUUN! The Queen’s Diamond will be held center of the the room, covered by a glass pyramid, so be careful not to trigger the alarm.
SETH
Hello, Police, i'd like to report a robbery, up north at the Master Museum.
ROMAN
Seth, you there, where is this nutter?.
*POLICE SIRENS*
DEAN:
oh, Roman, wonder who set this up!
Sentenced to 3 years in prison...
Released a year later…
EXT. OUTSIDE PRISON - NOON
ROMAN
where is that person i used to call brother?
DEAN
oh, we’ll find him and when we do, you don’t even wanna know what i’m going to do
ROMAN
There goes the dream, and with added security we ain't getting any money any time soon.
ROMAN
Seth, Dean, everything sorted?... gloves,phone,knife?
DEAN
We are going to be rich! you hear me RICH!
ROMAN
You know it brother, Seth you okay? you seem a bit anxious
SETH
hmm,huh? no,no just thinking about the money we are going to have.
ROMAN
Let’s go boys!
15 MINUTES LATER…
EXT. MUSEUM - NIGHT
ROMAN
Seth,you act as bait, whilst Dean sneaks round back, just remember there is expected lasers, placed in the order of 18cm,12cm,18cm, so on. i’ll watch lookout, if there is any unexpected figure, Breach! which basically means, RUUUN! The Queen’s Diamond will be held center of the the room, covered by a glass pyramid, so be careful not to trigger the alarm.
SETH
Hello, Police, i'd like to report a robbery, up north at the Master Museum.
ROMAN
Seth, you there, where is this nutter?.
*POLICE SIRENS*
DEAN:
oh, Roman, wonder who set this up!
Sentenced to 3 years in prison...
Released a year later…
EXT. OUTSIDE PRISON - NOON
ROMAN
where is that person i used to call brother?
DEAN
oh, we’ll find him and when we do, you don’t even wanna know what i’m going to do
ROMAN
There goes the dream, and with added security we ain't getting any money any time soon.
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- 1950s DRESS - CARMEN'S DRESS
- SUIT - THE SUIT FOR TOM
PROPS
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WEEK ONE
In this week we chose who's storyboard to pick in our group. In our group we have, Alicia,David,Lily and I. We then decided the roles each person in our group had. David was the protagonist, I will be the director, Lily will be the camera operator
WEEK TWO
during week three, we began filming parts of the script, we decided what angles were best for the particular scene,for example, we tried a scene where a figure was exiting the elevator, this was a hard scene to film due to the fact of the school environment and the lesson changeovers, etc.
WEEK THREE
everyone in our group was ready to start filming some scenes. We did try different angles,lighting and settings to get it right. For example we tried the lipstick scene with Alicia in front of the green screen, but we all agreed that the scene could have been improved and maybe re-filmed to make it look more professional, this was important because we spotted a lot of parts which wast supposed to be there, for example it looked to obvious when she put the mirror over the screen.
WEEK FOUR
in the fourth week, we started thinking about the costumes so, Alicia, brought in a 1950s dress with black heels and lipstick and David used a blazer and a hat from the media department, Lily thought of new scenes to add to add to the intro, the scene was when the femme fatales brother got shot after a meet up, at first we thought it was really good but when we got to final cut pro we saw that someone walked past in the background.
WEEK FIVE
Lily filmed Alicia against the wall and David used the light from his phone which was to show my shadow, it was effective and less obvious that we were filming in the classroom. After filming the lipstick scene we then filmed the alleyway scene outside the drama huts, we then experimented with different angles to see which angle best fits.
WEEK SIX
In week seven, we were given a sheet of paper to analyse two film noir opening, we were told to write what was good about the two scenes, we were also told to write what they could've improved. After we did this we joined up with our ground and watched them again and Miss Roque told us that we should re-film the makeup scene and re-film the scene where i got shot so it could be in time with the gun shot.
WEEK SEVEN
this was the final week of filming all our scenes, this week was kind of a rush because we were nervous about getting all of the scenes done, and looked at scenes we could've improved. we filmed the bar scene, it seemed easy but was hard to set up because we had to put the board on the wall and we had a short supply of pins, we had a lot of failed scenes because of forgotten words but overall it was a good scene and we were all happy with the way it turned out.
WEEK EIGHT
This week i was absent, but our group didn't do much, they were told to continue blogging,do voice-overs and do anything that needs to be finished or improved. they also found a background for the board scene.
WEEK NINE
During this week, we were told that we had to change most of our story, because our doomed hero wasn't involved as much as he should be, We changed Alicia so that she was a proper femme fatale. our group decided to make up a new story but chose to keep most of our scene.
WEEK TEN
during this week, we changed the whole script so that it matches the new script.